She was from Turkey,she was born in Turkey hospital.
Why is she dressed in this way?
I think she dresses beautifully to go on a special trip to the magic land.
I think she dresses beautifully to go on a special trip to the magic land.
In what ways have things gone wrong for her?
She missed the flying ship because she woke up late.
She missed the flying ship because she woke up late.
Who is on the flying ship?
I think there are mysterious people on the ship
I think there are mysterious people on the ship
Why is she feeling panic and despair? Why might these feelings be ‘overwhelming’?
She felt panic and despair because she missed out to go to the magic land.
What will the girl do next? Will the ship turn back?
She will wait until the ship comes back.
Why has it left without her?
Because Marie was too late.
Why has it left without her?
Because Marie was too late.
Kevin's story writing
Once upon a time,there was a girl called Marie,she was born in Turkey hospital,and she was from Turkey.One day she saw a flying ship at the desert and then she went in it but no one was there and then someone popped behind Marie and said tomorrow you have to come here said a strange person.He looked old,oddly tall , and a That unusual person gave her a ticket and it said depart time at 9:00 am in the morning.However next day she woke up at 9:05 am,she was late for her trip on the magic ship she got on yesterday!So Marie had to hurry up and catch up to the ship or she will be late.But she was really upset when she got there because she was already late.Then she had to go to wait by the rock by the desert and wait until she saw the ship arrive back to the desert.Six hours had passed,suddenly,she saw the magic ship that flew up to the sky.Then she ran to them but they were gone already.She was late again,but this time she waited by the rocks anxiously.Then they arrived back 1 hour.Next she saw the ship did not leave then she went in the ship and the mysterious man drove the ship to the magic town to let Marie see where it went.After five hours they came back and she trembled and wiped her tears because it was so beautiful there.After that,she walked down the ship,and she was glad that she finally made it to see the magic town. That ride was amazing Marie thought.Finally she went home and had dinner and went to brush her teeth.She sleep and had a great dream about the magic land.
Once upon a time,there was a girl called Marie,she was born in Turkey hospital,and she was from Turkey.One day she saw a flying ship at the desert and then she went in it but no one was there and then someone popped behind Marie and said tomorrow you have to come here said a strange person.He looked old,oddly tall , and a That unusual person gave her a ticket and it said depart time at 9:00 am in the morning.However next day she woke up at 9:05 am,she was late for her trip on the magic ship she got on yesterday!So Marie had to hurry up and catch up to the ship or she will be late.But she was really upset when she got there because she was already late.Then she had to go to wait by the rock by the desert and wait until she saw the ship arrive back to the desert.Six hours had passed,suddenly,she saw the magic ship that flew up to the sky.Then she ran to them but they were gone already.She was late again,but this time she waited by the rocks anxiously.Then they arrived back 1 hour.Next she saw the ship did not leave then she went in the ship and the mysterious man drove the ship to the magic town to let Marie see where it went.After five hours they came back and she trembled and wiped her tears because it was so beautiful there.After that,she walked down the ship,and she was glad that she finally made it to see the magic town. That ride was amazing Marie thought.Finally she went home and had dinner and went to brush her teeth.She sleep and had a great dream about the magic land.
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ReplyDeleteHi Kevin,
ReplyDeleteGreat work. You clearly understood the instructions and have underlined the adverbs and highlighted the adjectives, and there are some great adjectives. Keep up the great work!!
Hi Mrs Simanu, thanks for your comments and the adjectives i got is from your board.😀
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