I will be one of the meerkats. Lets start!!!My name is K meerkat, my friends and i were slepping in a burrow.Then we woke up and my friends saw a berry fruit on a tree.Suddenly, an evil vulture came. It snatched the fruit on the tree.After that we all decided to get back the fruit.Next, all of us ran after the vulture.After that,we climbed the vultures leg and the vulture threw us in the air, and then he saw the one of my friend hold the berry,the vulture flew up and tried to get the berry, but the other meerkats passed it to the other meerkats. Finally, the vulture got the berry,and all of us fell down from the sky .Next,the vulture did a evil smile and but he did not noticed there was a mountain so he crashed and we got the berry and then i kicked it over the tree (like a rugby player) .Goal!!!!!! we all said, but the berry broke, and we were all sad.The vulture did another evil laugh as flew away.The end,story told by Kevin.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
Catch it retell by Kevin.
I will be one of the meerkats. Lets start!!!My name is K meerkat, my friends and i were slepping in a burrow.Then we woke up and my friends saw a berry fruit on a tree.Suddenly, an evil vulture came. It snatched the fruit on the tree.After that we all decided to get back the fruit.Next, all of us ran after the vulture.After that,we climbed the vultures leg and the vulture threw us in the air, and then he saw the one of my friend hold the berry,the vulture flew up and tried to get the berry, but the other meerkats passed it to the other meerkats. Finally, the vulture got the berry,and all of us fell down from the sky .Next,the vulture did a evil smile and but he did not noticed there was a mountain so he crashed and we got the berry and then i kicked it over the tree (like a rugby player) .Goal!!!!!! we all said, but the berry broke, and we were all sad.The vulture did another evil laugh as flew away.The end,story told by Kevin.
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Hi Kevin! I really enjoyed your story retelling and extra special to have a video as well. Kapai!
ReplyDeleteI love how you were trying to use sentence starters like after, next and finally to retell the story in order. You've been working really hard keep it up !
thank you Mrs Rachel.I love your comment
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ReplyDeleteGreat video. You clearly understand this story and was able to retell it well.
What is your favourite part of the story?
Hi Mrs Simanu, my favourite part of the video clip was the vulture crashed in the wall.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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