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Thursday, September 24, 2020

My story writing about the sinking ship.

 HI my name is Kevin,i am learning about story writing,my story is about the sinking ship.

Once upon a time,there brave and smart animals.The animals can do things that are smart.One day a violent storm came a washed away there home,the animals felt horrified,Then they saw a rusty old boat.So the animals ran straight for the boat.After a while,the boat had reached a zoo,one of the animals read the sign it said: zoo for homeless animals,the animals were excited,they ran straight in and asked the zoo keeper if they can stay there.The zoo keeper agreed.Now the animals can live happily every after.

The end.


And that is my story,do you guys have a  story that you can share with me?

Comment down bellow if you can add a comment to share the story or make a link so I can see it!

Bye everyone!

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