Poetry about the guide to the ode cruchie rocks chocolate.
On the outside,it looks like a:
Square peanut
bowling ball
Brown crunchie peanut
It feels like:
minerals
Feels cold
Feels hard
When I eat it,it tastes like:
Heavenly chocolate
Heavenly hokey pokey
Heavenly nuts
That is my poetry.
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that was a great poem Kevin
ReplyDeleteThanks Andy,can you try to make a poem like this?
ReplyDeleteRegards:Kevin